Reaper Raiders

by **Jordan** Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:10 am

The reaper raiders were soul reapers who were the most terrfying creatues alive in their time.
They went around burning castles, houses and barns. They killed famillies; they fought armies. All for one purpose. Souls.
Their Leader, Ecame, was the one who fed upon the trapped souls the most and is remembered as the greatest Soul reaper that ever stood - or floated - upon the ground.
Their captain was Redkad who controlled the attacks and strategies and was the mind and brains of the group (Of course, the leader was still the celverist).
Then there was Makson who had a soul blade that allowed him to reap souls simply and efficiantly.
Finally there was the smallest and the youngest one - A soul reaper in training. Their name was unknown.
This little troop could use the souls they took for summonings of skeltons to fight along side them. However, that wasn\'t just their only use...
As time went on, these soul reapers were eventually defeated by the humans who were the next most powerful to the Reapers. The King, Zaker Ryder, called his friend and ally Xervish Flydd (back then he was known as Yoshimoto.) They worked together, in battle, to defeat the soul reapers and free all the souls from the soul blade and the grasp of the Reapers. All but the younger one survived and no one knows anything of what happened to them, where they went or what they\'re doing. Legend has it that they said they would return when the times right.
Many people, today, say that time is now, now that the Shura are attacking.

by **Gareth** Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:13 am

Ahem.

My Shura will [probably] beat any of them and this is very badly written, it's good a story but it's phrasing and spelling are quite horrible.

by **Jordan** Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:14 am

I was gonna put people can edit it so you may if you wish.

by **Gareth** Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:24 am

Want me to just rewrite it from scratch later?

by **Jordan** Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:28 am

Gareth wrote:Want me to just rewrite it from scratch later?

Ok but keep it in this post.

by **Gareth** Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:39 am

One thousand years ago, a scourge of evil moved across the lands - a band of powerful demons known as the soul reapers. Their leader, Ecame, was one of the most feared villains in history and is probably in among the three greatest along with Arnon and The Dark Lord. They travelled every where, killing men, women and children all for the sake of collecting what they needed most. Souls. Among the troops was a young reaper though no one, presently, remembers much about this child as he was not one of the most well known in this legend. He or she (No-one knows which) was training in order to match the other Soul Reapers despite the fact they already had a lot of power built up within themselves and could of easily matched Ecame in battle at the time. They attempted to claim the soul of king Zaker Ryder but he employed the help of a friend. Xervish Flydd, then called Yoshimoto who in the future would be of great aid to monarchs like Zen, came to help him and- being a powerful mage - he used his great energy to defeat Ecame and all of the band except one faithful warrior who faded away with his ancient weapon, a sword capable of ripping souls from their host bodies. Such a weapon could destroy anyone (or anything) that it came up against in combat such as a certain Shura maybe... People believe that this old legend could be real just like the legend of the Shura and , if it is, the question on every man, woman and childs lips will be.. Can the reaper defeat Arnon in combat or will it crash and burn against the Shura Lord?

[Just went through and edited some spelling, punctuation, grammar and phrasing. Loving it though - Josh geek