Anyone able to help me on my french GCSE?

[Josh]

If you know french, could you please check this over? It's only a draft and not the whole thing but help would be appreciated. No internet translating please.

D'habitube, je mange beaucoup de les legume et fruit, comme la coconbre et la tomate. Le matin, je mange les cereals parce que il continient beaucoup des fibres. Quand j'etais plus jeuene, je mangeais le chocolat pour petit dejeuner tout le temps mais je pense que mauvais pour mon santé.

The whole thing is meant to be 300 words and we have 6 bullet points to write about which is about 50 words per paragraph. That is about 50 words up there and it is hardly anything which sucks. You can hardly write much :l. The point i just wrote about was Your diet and/or what it used to be like when you were younger. I'm supposed to be aiming for an A in this.

[Roland]

Im doing french for GCSE and that is pretty good.

My french teachers always telling me to use past tense and connectives to boost my grade.

[Josh]

Thanks :] I think i got Imperfect tense and Imperfect future (I forget the name of that tense) nailed down pretty well. Ill remember to add more connectives though.

[Roland]

Glad to be of service

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